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 Posted: Sat Mar 30th, 2019 06:05 am
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SongWriterJoe



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That bridge is very good;
excellent meter and flow. Very poignant. Possible suggestion:

Was it the bullets, the bombings, the bodies..
The blood in 3D?
Or jarring explosions that created
The scars we don’t see?

SWJ

Last edited on Sat Mar 30th, 2019 06:09 am by SongWriterJoe



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