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|Posted: Sat Mar 30th, 2019 05:05 am||
|That bridge is very good;
excellent meter and flow. Very poignant. Possible suggestion:
Was it the bullets, the bombings, the bodies..
The blood in 3D?
Or jarring explosions that created
The scars we don’t see?
Last edited on Sat Mar 30th, 2019 05:09 am by SongWriterJoe
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