View single post by SongWriterJoe
 Posted: Sat Mar 30th, 2019 05:05 am
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Joined: Thu Mar 22nd, 2018
Location: Eugene, Oregon USA
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That bridge is very good;
excellent meter and flow. Very poignant. Possible suggestion:

Was it the bullets, the bombings, the bodies..
The blood in 3D?
Or jarring explosions that created
The scars we don’t see?


Last edited on Sat Mar 30th, 2019 05:09 am by SongWriterJoe

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