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 Posted: Fri Mar 29th, 2019 03:57 pm
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M.P. Dudash



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Charles, cool write. I’m not sure it fits in with the country theme though. I place this with more of a metal edge. I especially like the bridge. Very vivid imagery. The one word I think I would change is crescendo (with) instead of in, that’s just my take though, but overall it works. Nice job



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