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|Posted: Tue Mar 5th, 2019 10:00 pm||
|Hi Joe, These lyrics started strong. I loved the first 2 verses and the chorus. For me, it turned when you brought another person into the story(Job). I think you can say the same ideas without adding Job. In my opinion, it would be stronger.
We may not always know God's perfect plan - a good idea for a verse.
One word change suggestion I will make is in verse 2:
'Though I may be tempted to stray from Your way.
I know You're there always for me..
And Your great sacrifice sets my heart and soul free..
It makes me the best I can be."
I am not sure about makes. Maybe shows, or delivers, gives...
Just my ideas, hope they help some