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 Posted: Fri Feb 15th, 2019 02:01 am
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Kel

 

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RainyDayMan wrote:
The verses and the story line are very strong!

It's hard to tell with the chorus, it will really depend on the music there. The words don't seem very memorable, but the way they are sung might be.


Yes, very true. Could even drop the chorus as it really doesn't carry the story along... Great idea!



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