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 Posted: Mon Feb 11th, 2019 06:39 pm
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SongWriterJoe



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Two things of note.. I would say "All My Heart".. it sings well and is very smooth. Also that excess repetition. One technique is vary the line just a tiny bit each time.. example:

He's runnin' out of midnight oil
He's burned all his midnight oil
Runnin' low on the ol' midnight oil
Midnight has come and gone and so's the oil

None of these were supposed to make sense, just used them as a tool to demonstrate the concept

SWJ

Last edited on Mon Feb 11th, 2019 06:41 pm by SongWriterJoe



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