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 Posted: Sun Feb 10th, 2019 06:30 pm
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Andrea wrote: Hi Sketch, I like this one quite a bit.


My only thought would be to maybe swap verse 1 and 2. I guess a chorus couldn't hurt.

Thanks, Andrea.

The first line in verse one is the origin of the song. (see post #1)
This song is an example of a no-chorus song. (one of a few)
The last line of each verse takes the place of a chorus. (as I see it)
And is a great way to strengthen a song by making a stronger "hook".
Without looking back at the lyrics, which line do you remember best?

- Sketch



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