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 Posted: Sat Feb 9th, 2019 11:58 am
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Motorist Sketchbook



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I don't see any problem with this style of writing. (verses only)

I have used this technique successfully. IMHO
Most notably on these three songs titled:
To the End of the World (link to forum topic)
When Life Shows Up (link to forum topic)
Who Ya Gonna Call, Big Daddy? (link to forum topic) 

I like what Kel is saying about reconsidering the structure.

I think it could be as simple as swapping the second to last verse up to the verse three position.
That would be as AABAAC structure. (with an ending as written)

- Sketch



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