|View single post by Motorist Sketchbook|
|Posted: Sat Feb 9th, 2019 11:58 am||
|I don't see any problem with this style of writing. (verses only)
I have used this technique successfully. IMHO
Most notably on these three songs titled:
To the End of the World (link to forum topic)
When Life Shows Up (link to forum topic)
Who Ya Gonna Call, Big Daddy? (link to forum topic)
I like what Kel is saying about reconsidering the structure.
I think it could be as simple as swapping the second to last verse up to the verse three position.
That would be as AABAAC structure. (with an ending as written)
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