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Posted: Sat Feb 9th, 2019 12:58 pm |
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I don't see any problem with this style of writing. (verses only) I have used this technique successfully. IMHO Most notably on these three songs titled: To the End of the World (link to forum topic) When Life Shows Up (link to forum topic) Who Ya Gonna Call, Big Daddy? (link to forum topic) I like what Kel is saying about reconsidering the structure. I think it could be as simple as swapping the second to last verse up to the verse three position. That would be as AABAAC structure. (with an ending as written) - Sketch
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