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 Posted: Fri Feb 8th, 2019 03:15 am
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Kel

 

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samiamiamsam wrote:
I can definitely picture this with music. It has a nice flow to it. Lyrics are fun and catchy.

Thanks, much appreciated.

M.P. Dudash wrote:
Kel, first let me welcome you. It’s nice to see a new face in the country section. Tends to be where I hang other than the few gospel songs I try my hand at. You touch on a subject that most can relate to at one point or another. I always refer relatable songs rather than those with me real topic. Probably the one issue I have is v1 line 4. I say swap lines 3 and 4 or maybe shorten line 4. The rest seems to work, nice job.

Thanks M.P. I checked it out, but it works nicely with the melody I have. I'll keep it in mind though as I start working on the music in detail.

Cheers,
Kel

Last edited on Fri Feb 8th, 2019 03:18 am by Kel



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