View single post by M.P. Dudash
 Posted: Fri Feb 8th, 2019 03:00 am
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M.P. Dudash



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Kel, first let me welcome you. It’s nice to see a new face in the country section. Tends to be where I hang other than the few gospel songs I try my hand at. You touch on a subject that most can relate to at one point or another. I always refer relatable songs rather than those with me real topic. Probably the one issue I have is v1 line 4. I say swap lines 3 and 4 or maybe shorten line 4. The rest seems to work, nice job.



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