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 Posted: Wed Feb 6th, 2019 07:51 pm
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RainyDayMan



Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
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It's a strong write MP!

I really liked:
It’s the best job I’ve ever had
the timing of it, as well as the line itself.

I wasn't sure about "till" in:
And ends till I get back

should that be "when"? or "doesn't end till I get back"?



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