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 Posted: Mon Feb 4th, 2019 02:06 pm
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Andrea

 

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First off, I really like the lyrics. I think you can make it work.

"Yeah that’s life" is a great line. I think you could work with this to make it more song like if needed. Maybe use a repeat


Yeah that’s life
Yeah that’s life
And it’s bound to, touch us all....

or
Yeah that’s life
that's life
And it’s bound to, touch us all....



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