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 Posted: Sun Feb 3rd, 2019 01:17 am
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RainyDayMan



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Doesn't read like a poem to me, I don't see why it shouldn't work. In general, one way to work a song without a chorus is to have more variation in the music within the verse. You could even combine two verses together with a more complicated melody throughout. In this case the "Yeah that's life" is likely to be the same in each case though.



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