View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Wed Jan 30th, 2019 08:37 pm
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Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
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I felt like the song hit its straps at
There’s a scar for every sunset
so maybe those first two verses need some attention.
The later verses are all written as if directly to the other person, so maybe those first two could move in that direction too.

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