View single post by Andrea
 Posted: Wed Jan 30th, 2019 06:19 pm
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Joined: Tue Nov 27th, 2018
Location: Poughkeepsie, New York USA
Posts: 1885
I have added more distress. I have a couple other ideas, but let me know if this works. Thanks

I've been floating along
in a poor mental state
wondering if happiness
will ever come my way

danger lurks
below the surface
invisible to see
losing my grip
on reality
a certain death
to all my dreams
like a river running out of me

I'm caught in a riptide
swimming in misery
caught in a riptide
pulling me under
spinning me round
I can't tell
which way is up
and which way is down

The current situation
feels out of control
anxiety, depression
are taking their toll

I'm drowning in
the highs
and lows
and turbulence
between the tides
a certain death
if I give in
excuses are running thin


I'm caught in a riptide
it carries me
so far away
from everything
I thought that life could be

I'm waiting
always waiting
for the tides to turn around
always waiting
to get me feet
back on the ground


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