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 Posted: Wed Jan 23rd, 2019 01:41 am
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SongWriterJoe



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It starts out good, then your rhyming doesn't work; it just falls apart - doesn't sing well. I do like the idea. Very original

Last edited on Wed Jan 23rd, 2019 01:44 am by SongWriterJoe



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