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 Posted: Wed Jan 16th, 2019 08:26 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Definite potential MP! Might need a word or two adjusted once set to music just for fit.

But I like the tone and feel of it.

I like the "Now I got a girl
Who can skin a buck" lines
creates a sense of contrast with the first wife

and I like the other lines too!

I can't quite feel the rhythm of it, but if you can get it set to music should be a good one.



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