|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Wed Jan 16th, 2019 08:26 pm||
|Definite potential MP! Might need a word or two adjusted once set to music just for fit.
But I like the tone and feel of it.
I like the "Now I got a girl
Who can skin a buck" lines
creates a sense of contrast with the first wife
and I like the other lines too!
I can't quite feel the rhythm of it, but if you can get it set to music should be a good one.