|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Sat Jan 12th, 2019 10:07 pm||
|Feels solid MP! Good strong hook, and a rollicking sort of story line. One to really sing along with.
I like how at the end you make it personal with:
She had tricks up her sleeves, that she pulled out on me
which is also a strong line of itself
I stumbled rhythmically on that 2nd line. I can't hear what's in your head, so it may be just fine as is, but perhaps:
Found she liked making men feel down > She liked making young men feel down