View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Wed Jan 9th, 2019 09:19 pm
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Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
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"Happy heartache" is a great hook and title.

I think you've gone a little dark here though.
There's room for this to be a happier, lighter song.
More along the lines of "I'll never understand you but I love you anyway".

When you get to "dying seems easier" that feels depressing to me and unnecessarily so.

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