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 Posted: Wed Jan 9th, 2019 08:19 pm
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RainyDayMan



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"Happy heartache" is a great hook and title.

I think you've gone a little dark here though.
There's room for this to be a happier, lighter song.
More along the lines of "I'll never understand you but I love you anyway".

When you get to "dying seems easier" that feels depressing to me and unnecessarily so.



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