|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Wed Jan 9th, 2019 08:19 pm||
|"Happy heartache" is a great hook and title.
I think you've gone a little dark here though.
There's room for this to be a happier, lighter song.
More along the lines of "I'll never understand you but I love you anyway".
When you get to "dying seems easier" that feels depressing to me and unnecessarily so.