View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Fri Jan 4th, 2019 08:36 pm
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I like the simple style of this, has a charm to it.

If it was me, I'd use the "nice to see you" and "where did time go" parts as verses, then introduce a chorus with longer lines and a different structure for variety.
Add another round of 2 x verses plus chorus, then maybe end back on the "nice to see you" verse to bookend the song.

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