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 Posted: Thu Oct 12th, 2017 05:37 am
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akazenogowan

 

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Hey I've got this new song that I'm stuck on. I've got a good first verse, but don't quite know where to go with it. I know I want to have a couple more verses that keep with the 'If you could make me' motif.
https://soundcloud.com/zenogowan/make-me-laugh/s-dR1gS

If you could make me laugh
Maybe you could win me over
At least a little bit
If you could make me smile
I could forget for a short while
About everything else


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