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 Posted: Sun Jul 2nd, 2017 03:26 am
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fasstrack



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Seamus:

I copied your lyric into Word, corrected some grammatical things, and---I hope you don't mind---changed 1 line to: '...a story that many times has been told'. Just seemed stronger.

When the spirit hits me, I'll be happy to try to write a suitable melody. Hell, if Sondheim can write about slitting people's throats, throwing them down a chute to where meat pies are made from them (Sweeney Todd)---AND have an award-winning hit, I'll be damned if I can't write some music to a theme less dark than that...



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