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 Posted: Tue Jun 13th, 2017 02:48 am
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Fasstrack, I'm glad that you feel it's better. Is there anything else that I should change in your opinion?

Rainydayman, if other people feel the same I will change it however, it kind of fits the idea that the first paragraph were just two kids thinking they were having fun. The rest of the song they have to settle down or try to settle down and make a home, raise a family. Which is undeniably a lot of work.



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