View single post by fasstrack
 Posted: Mon Jun 12th, 2017 11:28 pm
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Joined: Sat May 13th, 2017
Location: Philadelphia, Pennsylvania USA
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It IS better. Glad you lost that 'pinch my butt/affectionate' line. No one would've bought that.

The 'pillow talk' in the 1st verse reminds me of 'Ruining the sheets real fine' in You Make Me Mellow.

Keep on keepin' on...

'Charlie Christian got me in a world of trouble'...
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