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 Posted: Mon Jun 12th, 2017 11:28 pm
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fasstrack



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It IS better. Glad you lost that 'pinch my butt/affectionate' line. No one would've bought that.

The 'pillow talk' in the 1st verse reminds me of 'Ruining the sheets real fine' in You Make Me Mellow.

Keep on keepin' on...



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