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 Posted: Tue Oct 4th, 2016 02:34 am
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RainyDayMan



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I like the overall sound you've got going here. Nice guitar work!
I am having trouble hearing the lyrics though - would you mind posting them here? If you do, I'll comment on those later

As a couple of suggestions:
- I think Barefoot Blues is a stronger title than No Shoes Blues
- I'm not sure your intro is adding a lot to the song. Or at least I'm not seeing the connection to the rest as it seems quite different.

However, this is your song and suggestions are just that - for you to consider and adopt/reject as you see fit!



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