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New Message Base
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TSF-Mike |
Wed Apr 16th, 2008 09:54 pm
by TSF-Mike  |
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WHEN? a second draft of a rap song wanting criticism! 
I wrote this rap song a year ago and stumbled upon it after forgetting about it! So I made some tweaks! |
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VagabondVibes |
Sat Oct 13th, 2018 12:37 pm
by Motorist Sketchbook |
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Ocean Blue River of Tears
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jgkojak |
Fri Sep 7th, 2018 03:04 pm
by Motorist Sketchbook |
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Down With the Sun
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jgkojak |
Fri Aug 31st, 2018 04:02 pm
by Motorist Sketchbook |
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Blue hour
A lesson in imagery |
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LongShadows |
Fri Jul 27th, 2018 01:48 am
by LongShadows |
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some friendly advice
a little self explanatory allthough fully fantasised |
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Veance |
Sun Jun 24th, 2018 08:21 am
by RainyDayMan |
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Chasing the wind
Solomon's lament |
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Marty Ray Boone |
Mon May 28th, 2018 02:14 am
by RainyDayMan |
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SADLY I STILL WAIT FOR YOU - song in simple melody and chord frame
catchy sad song in need of lyrics and singer |
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farmer george |
Sat May 12th, 2018 06:45 pm
by farmer george |
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first set of lyrics
Dances for the moon |
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Billy_Lunch_Money |
Sat May 5th, 2018 02:47 pm
by Billy_Lunch_Money |
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Fade
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Kinkajou123 |
Wed Apr 25th, 2018 09:20 pm
by Billy_Lunch_Money |
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Adrenaline
Not sure what genre this is yet. Rock/Rap? Rock? Suggestions? |
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C.A.M |
Sat Apr 14th, 2018 09:09 pm
by C.A.M |
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Original song.
✔ it out! |
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FGM |
Tue Apr 10th, 2018 10:29 am
by Billy_Lunch_Money |
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Somewhere Man!
My opposite of Beatles song called, "Nowhere Man" |
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Marty Ray Boone |
Sat Apr 7th, 2018 10:33 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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Farts on fire
First comedy song on the forum! |
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Marty Ray Boone |
Sat Mar 31st, 2018 10:09 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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Comes a Melody
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LongShadows |
Tue Mar 27th, 2018 05:32 am
by LongShadows |
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So, there's this
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LongShadows |
Wed Mar 21st, 2018 08:03 pm
by LongShadows |
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Hold On Tight (Demo)
My first REAL song i've written. |
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Ken Einberg |
Wed Mar 7th, 2018 03:54 am
by LongShadows |
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Ballad of Railroad Bill
( dylan style folk blues) |
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Wrapscallionn |
Sun Mar 4th, 2018 09:56 pm
by Billy_Lunch_Money |
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True wip
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LongShadows |
Wed Feb 28th, 2018 11:15 pm
by Dogmax |
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Doublets
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LongShadows |
Sun Feb 18th, 2018 12:23 am
by Dogmax |
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Untitled Wip
back in the fray |
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LongShadows |
Sun Feb 4th, 2018 09:10 am
by LongShadows |
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Too Stupid to Care
Does something you wrote 30 years ago and almost forgot existed count as a work in progress? |
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LongShadows |
Sun Feb 4th, 2018 01:46 am
by RainyDayMan |
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A Summer Place
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wkamen |
Mon Dec 4th, 2017 04:30 pm
by wkamen |
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FANTASTIC MYTHOLOGY
mythology influenced fantasy classic rock lyrics |
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Songster Chris |
Sat Nov 11th, 2017 09:56 pm
by Songster Chris |
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I'm brave!
Work in progress |
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Shar1801 |
Fri Nov 3rd, 2017 10:18 am
by RainyDayMan |
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make me laugh
a new song! |
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akazenogowan |
Thu Oct 12th, 2017 09:25 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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Fat Cat - Structure feedback requested
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Ken Einberg |
Sun Aug 6th, 2017 11:07 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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Poison (An original)
https://soundcloud.com/nim-a-38984647/poison |
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Dudechillup |
Sun Aug 6th, 2017 05:35 am
by RainyDayMan |
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When?
New song I've been working on. Criticism wanted |
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VagabondVibes |
Sun Jun 25th, 2017 11:37 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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lead with your heart
I know it's not proper lyric format. |
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jmc123654 |
Sun Jun 25th, 2017 10:05 pm
by jmc123654 |
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Slow Learner
A country song about finally wising up |
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fasstrack |
Fri Jun 23rd, 2017 05:12 am
by fasstrack |
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Two 2 Tango
A song about a spat and break-up caused by words |
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fasstrack |
Mon Jun 19th, 2017 11:07 pm
by fasstrack |
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Long as I'm Living Without You
A bossa... |
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fasstrack |
Fri Jun 16th, 2017 12:43 am
by fasstrack |
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title suggestion and critique appreciated
is this better? Or are some of the words still too academic |
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jmc123654 |
Fri Jun 16th, 2017 12:30 am
by fasstrack |
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the note
lyrics, feel like its a good story, but they need help somehow |
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jmc123654 |
Wed Jun 14th, 2017 10:09 pm
by fasstrack |
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Love is an Inconvenience
What is says... |
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fasstrack |
Tue Jun 13th, 2017 02:06 pm
by fasstrack |
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Lifeless
A rap song I've been working on. First time writing rap, Critism wanted |
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VagabondVibes |
Fri Jun 9th, 2017 04:37 am
by VagabondVibes |
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this is a poem submitted for a contest on another website. Here it's just for kicks.
a spot of humor for your day |
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jmc123654 |
Sun Jun 4th, 2017 11:05 pm
by RainyDayMan |
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West
trying to find one that fires on more cylinders. this might not be it, but I'm trying. |
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jmc123654 |
Sun Jun 4th, 2017 12:38 am
by fasstrack |
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Love One Another
a song about love in this world |
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Psycho72 |
Thu Jun 1st, 2017 07:17 am
by VagabondVibes |
Current time is 03:04 pm
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